narrative story

At Pt England beach I, Marama and my friends were really hot.I was sitting in the sand while my friends were picking up shells.The water was high tide.


We were having so much fun until I had stayed on the sand for too long and had gotten sunburned. It was so sore that if I touched it I might have cried.Jumping into the water,och!!!!!! I screamed on the top of my lungs.I thought my sunburnt might not hurt it was really sore I didn’t think that if I jumped in the water it wouldn’t hurt.


Me and my friends were running as fast as we can like the gingerbread man. Off the rock onto the sand until Something impossible happened next. A shark jumped out of nowhere and took one of my friends. I was screaming really loud the birds that was at the beach flew away.


We were running to the sand and my friend slipped into the water. She screamed so I  ran to pull her up and a sea monster pulled her back.I jumped into the water to try save her but I got swallowed too but I tickled from the inside and the sea monster vomit us both out.

A picture tells a story.

Taking my ninja brother trick or treating around the neighborhood we had our bucket filled up with lollies. I was dressed as a clown. Walking home my brother said ”Can we eat the lollies now?” “No!” I shouted “they’re my lollies.” ”NO they aren't” my brother shouted madly” So I punched my brother and he ran off and told mum.

Barsketball

BASKETBALL is cool there where two men who tort us how to play basketball.My favrite part
was when they tort us how to play golden child.Golden child is when there are two teams.One team shooting the ball in the hoop and the other team is running around one at a time.I think that game is cool.For real I hate basketball but this year was fun but not all the time.It was fun this year for basketball.



It was hard when I tried to dribble because I'm not used to basket ball.
For real I really hate basketball but this year it was fun i really enjoyed it.It was really fun.I had fun dribbing around the cones but sometimes when I tried to shoot I missed and when I play for real with my class I miss all the time.

Farewell mrs verry

Farewell to our dear Mrs Verry from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Walking into the hall feeling sad but I did not show it.Looking at Mrs Verry she is the queen of bling.She was wearing a pretty bracelet  and a pretty necklace.Her hair was straten.Some of girls were doing a perform a Samoan dance for our pretty Mrs Verry.


Before the girls did the samoan dance some of the girls did a spect in samoan.I did not understand it but I knew it was special to mrs verry.The girl’s started the ance it was wonderful there was a girl Jorden she’s in class she was good at that dance well that’s want I think.



Then the junior pomona was doing a dance to it  was good for there age.I liked how anahera used her loudness voice on the song for

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In the paralympics Richard Whitehead  won the 100m run and got a sparkly gold medal. Richard is proud of himself winning. He is happy because he’s in the middle of the track raising his arms up high,  while swinging  his flag above his head and proudly jumping in the air.

Tommy Wilson

Tommy wilson
Do you know what  a putta boom boom is? Its Tommy wilson ferrari cool name for it do you think.If you went to the hall  on friday what was your favorite thing what Tommy wilson exclaimed.My one was the putta boom boom and bro and mate I will tell you about bro and mate.


Tommy Wilson lived with the price for a while and he had to call the price your hines.After two weeks the price said to Tommy Wilson the you can call me bro and  tommy said ok.Then a week went past tommy you can call me mate.




Tommy tort pt england that there are five  important lesson, Make ten people smile everyday,wars are dum,learn to forgive,everybody is born with a gifted and smile.Do you know what Tommy caled crying?boo hoo juice really funny right.

re-crafting

Aldora’s Cross Country Recount

Today we practice a piece of  writing.The first paragraph is Adoras and the second is mine.

I had fun running the whole track with my friends. It was awesome, and most of all it’s fun hearing about your friends achieving their goals. It was an amazing day.


As I looked back on the day I’d had cross country I was filled with happiness.I had enjoyed hearing that my friends achieved their goals.Wow, what an amazing experience.The cross country had turned out to be fun.Did you achieve your goal in cross country?