At Pt England beach I, Marama and my friends were really hot.I was sitting in the sand while my friends were picking up shells.The water was high tide.
We were having so much fun until I had stayed on the sand for too long and had gotten sunburned. It was so sore that if I touched it I might have cried.Jumping into the water,och!!!!!! I screamed on the top of my lungs.I thought my sunburnt might not hurt it was really sore I didn’t think that if I jumped in the water it wouldn’t hurt.
Me and my friends were running as fast as we can like the gingerbread man. Off the rock onto the sand until Something impossible happened next. A shark jumped out of nowhere and took one of my friends. I was screaming really loud the birds that was at the beach flew away.
We were running to the sand and my friend slipped into the water. She screamed so I ran to pull her up and a sea monster pulled her back.I jumped into the water to try save her but I got swallowed too but I tickled from the inside and the sea monster vomit us both out.
We were having so much fun until I had stayed on the sand for too long and had gotten sunburned. It was so sore that if I touched it I might have cried.Jumping into the water,och!!!!!! I screamed on the top of my lungs.I thought my sunburnt might not hurt it was really sore I didn’t think that if I jumped in the water it wouldn’t hurt.
Me and my friends were running as fast as we can like the gingerbread man. Off the rock onto the sand until Something impossible happened next. A shark jumped out of nowhere and took one of my friends. I was screaming really loud the birds that was at the beach flew away.
We were running to the sand and my friend slipped into the water. She screamed so I ran to pull her up and a sea monster pulled her back.I jumped into the water to try save her but I got swallowed too but I tickled from the inside and the sea monster vomit us both out.
1 comment:
Hi marama I like what you wrote it is creative and long keep up the good work
Post a Comment