There was a whisper,writing test

One day  me and my mate’s were training the horse until we heard a whisper. so we went to the cow shed and had a look I thought it might of been the kids next door,but when I got there,there was no one there no cows either the cows are on the fields.

“HMMMMMM I wonder what was that  I fired said Quickly” “I said strongly haven’t you heard the scary story”? “well it started in 1998,when this lovely old man use to one this farm” “wait don’t tell he died” “yes in a weird way no one knew how he died but people use to stay he came over on the 4 July on the day that he died”.  “Isn’t the 4 off July today” YES” “so what you're telling me now that,that whisper was the old man yes plus he had a name his was old man Ben well that people called him” “Why was he whispering?” well people said when vist the cowshed he whispers.

“so he doesn’t scar his favourite cow” “but there is no cow’s in the?” OH I never thought of that !!! or probably his favourite cow died too”,”well I think? or what happens his favourite cow is still here?? “what is the oldest cow,well I don't let out shes getting old and what happens if she dies. At least can I see her please year shore but don't be too rough. Suddenly when got there was a person in there with her,I yelled as hard as i can and told them that there are not allowed to be in this part off this farm. and he looked and it look like he was crying and when i ran there the cow was died and the man was a  spirit.

“So what were you telling me about the story OH year what part was I up too”,”mmmmhhhh year how he died”. “well I told no one knew how he died,”then let’s go to the place where he died and I said ok” let go so we got there by this old tree, is this where he died  yeah well you know when I told you that no one knew well there is one person”,”how,me you how do you now because that was grandfather that died he always took me too this tree”,”and then he came and told him to leave this place NOW “ so I ask him why are angry. I  can not explained it but my grandfather had powers or something and lifted my friend I shouted live her alone papa and he looked at me and said marama yes it me  papa why are you scaring my friend because I was murdered by her dad,my dad  my friend said how do you know my dad we were old friend on till one day he said that something was wrong and took me too this tree and killed me with the knife that you have,which knife your favourite knife you kidding write. now he is died and trying too get revenge. The end.