My writing sample

Planning:

Place: Point england school,

Intro: Thanking the people who built this school and thought of building our school.

Paragraph 1 : How I’m going to introduce the school to the world.

Paragraph 2: how we learn on our netbooks.

Paragraph 3 : how we learn off other peoples blogs.

Paragraph 4 : how we go to tamaki college and learn.

conclusion: the comment at the end of  your story.

My school is important to me and our community.Because if I wasn't here then I wouldn't be learning at all, thats why I want to thank the people who thought of building this school.

At our wonderful school we are safe ,we learn a lot and we always make new friends. Friend are important at our school.We should never have to be alone, only if you want to be by yourself.If someone is feeling lonely then you should go up to them and ask if they would like to play what you are playing.

Our school really value people showing empathy,how we learn at our school is using our netbooks and multimedia. We have been learning so much  from learning on our netbooks and multimedia, we are even teaching our parents how to learn to control a netbook. Each and everyone of us are teaching the world at our school, by putting information on our blogs. We do writing,maths,reading,science and the year 7 & 8 goes to tech on tuesdays and thursdays.

Our blog is what we put writing,reading,maths and science activities, we put our activities on our blog so we can show the world the way we learn. We can also leave a comment and reply to a comment and we can even learn things off little kids.

At the excellent Tamaki College we learn how to make things like wood works and real necklace that you make yourself, thats Mr Grundy class,which I am in. We learn about graphics,and how to make food. I really enjoy going tech thats why  I want to go every single day.

We have learnt a lot from each and one of  us. Put yourself in there shoes and keep up the good work everybody.