2013 Reflection

Hello my name is Marama mark and i am a year 6 at point England school. I have had my net book since i was a year 5,that was year I have learnt so much things for the past 2 year I enjoy having the Internet so we can share fact about anything and that's how people learn.

The significant thing that I learnt by-myself was when I do free blog writing I like too write about my favourite books like Geronimo Stilton his book is my favourite so one day I looked up Geronimo Stilton and there was heaps of things that I did not know about him and I clicked on this site off his and it was so cool. It had lots of thing like games,his stories,facts about him and much more.

I have learnt  so many thing from other people blogs like my cousin Tihi he learnt some things that I did not know. So I have learnt some things from my little cousin.

What I have learnt from my friend was  I have learnt how too too learn too write better like instead of  saying said I can use more excited words then said thank you Mary for helping me learn and talk better thank you!!!

I have taught heaps of kids thing even adults they can go on my blog which heaps of people have go on here is the URL for my blog pesmaramam.blogspot.com I have so many different thing I learn every day and that's how I teach other people.

The special thing that my teacher has taught me is  how too write and read thank you MR S for teaching us all the thing that you have learnt and showing us reading is one of the things that I love doing but sometime MR S YOU ARE MEAN FOR NOT GIVING US FOLLOW UP’S,but its alright Thank you Mr S.

Grass To Glass

Marama grass to glass from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Wonderful Fact About Farming

Here is some fact about farm animals.

Merry christmas

My amazing trip to kawau island

I heard a whisper

Planning: Me and my friends were in the forest too complete our mission

characters: me marama,Mary,Sarah and harry Where it is set: forest

One day me and my friends were in the forest try too complete our secret mission. But please do not tell me and my friend’s are spy’s,YES you heard spy. We have too try and charter the the wild snake that evil doctor drake. Me and my friend were talking too each other what is your favourite spy equipment,I said “invisible”,harry said “why invisible”,I said proudly “because I’m really good at it”,”so” harry said jealously. Harry said “my favourite is shrink mode”. Mary said “blend mode”,Sarah said “smoke mode”

So then when we told each other favourite things suddenly we heard A noise, “wait don’t tell me it was a ghost” Sarah said frigidly. “No it was just a whisper”,A whisper like ghost!!!”,”no no Sarah trust it can not be a ghost or it would scared us ages ago”.”okay I trust you. “booo” “aheaa” marama we have too go”no we don’t it was just Harry scaring you”okay Harry stop it it not funny”YES IT IS”no it not” yes it is”ohhhhhhhhhhh you're such annoying”then when Sarah looked the other way harry was gone,”Harry where are you it’s not funny” “down here” I looked down and all I can see is hot air balloons “wait where did these come from”, oh no were going too die the ghost is going too get us said Sarah.

So we head of too catch evil doctor drake and on the way Mary was singing and fall over and landed into this trap so we tyred too too get her out but we all fall in with her so we tyred too make a human pyramid.and we got such so could too get out but then we heard a whisper again we had a look and it was a man calling for help he was in the trap hole with us “oh no are we going turn old and look like him” Mary said. And we could not get out so I said we need too get outta here “hey what about our hand holder what is that” harry said “it is a hand that hold on too things” really marama it sounds lame!!!!” do you want too get or no” yes” then listen. So did and got out and when we kept walking we fall into another hole “oh no” “use that hand holder again” i don’t have harry has it” no i don't have” oh that means we lost it oh man”.

Questions 5,6&7

Question 3&4

Herble life,come and join

Yesterday me and my mum went too fitness club,straight after school and when we got there `I got introduced too everyone there. It was so cool because when they say gurl it sounds like gurllll it sound’s so cool. Me and my mum have been doing fitness everyday  after school and in the morning at 9:30 my mum goes and does some zumba. And the day before yesterday oliti and his brother’s were there with there mum,there mum is an instructor.

One day everybody should have a try it does not taste well but it has different jobs the aloe helps burn fat,herbal tea helps relax while doing zumba so just not worrying about anything and the shake makes you full so if you were hungry for takeaways and then had a shake you would not be hungry.

There was a whisper,writing test

One day  me and my mate’s were training the horse until we heard a whisper. so we went to the cow shed and had a look I thought it might of been the kids next door,but when I got there,there was no one there no cows either the cows are on the fields.

“HMMMMMM I wonder what was that  I fired said Quickly” “I said strongly haven’t you heard the scary story”? “well it started in 1998,when this lovely old man use to one this farm” “wait don’t tell he died” “yes in a weird way no one knew how he died but people use to stay he came over on the 4 July on the day that he died”.  “Isn’t the 4 off July today” YES” “so what you're telling me now that,that whisper was the old man yes plus he had a name his was old man Ben well that people called him” “Why was he whispering?” well people said when vist the cowshed he whispers.

“so he doesn’t scar his favourite cow” “but there is no cow’s in the?” OH I never thought of that !!! or probably his favourite cow died too”,”well I think? or what happens his favourite cow is still here?? “what is the oldest cow,well I don't let out shes getting old and what happens if she dies. At least can I see her please year shore but don't be too rough. Suddenly when got there was a person in there with her,I yelled as hard as i can and told them that there are not allowed to be in this part off this farm. and he looked and it look like he was crying and when i ran there the cow was died and the man was a  spirit.

“So what were you telling me about the story OH year what part was I up too”,”mmmmhhhh year how he died”. “well I told no one knew how he died,”then let’s go to the place where he died and I said ok” let go so we got there by this old tree, is this where he died  yeah well you know when I told you that no one knew well there is one person”,”how,me you how do you now because that was grandfather that died he always took me too this tree”,”and then he came and told him to leave this place NOW “ so I ask him why are angry. I  can not explained it but my grandfather had powers or something and lifted my friend I shouted live her alone papa and he looked at me and said marama yes it me  papa why are you scaring my friend because I was murdered by her dad,my dad  my friend said how do you know my dad we were old friend on till one day he said that something was wrong and took me too this tree and killed me with the knife that you have,which knife your favourite knife you kidding write. now he is died and trying too get revenge. The end.

DLO Digtal learing object.

Question 1:

Question 2:

Rosie.

One day a girl was helping her dad for the day,her dad just bought five hundred sheep’s. They put sheep’s in to group’s by horse and dogs. The dog can hold the sheep just by steering. The put the sheep's overnight so they can be washed and dried. Now it’s time to go to the shed to finish our jobs. I have to spread each fleece on the table,and sort the clean wool with the dirty one’s. I help put the wool into the bags,and you just keep on doing it until the truck’s came to pick it up.

My friends

These are my friends from school,All my friends help each other if someone is feeling sad or angry. We help each other with our work with any. That is what is cool to have my friends.

These are my friends  Mary,gloria,brooklyn,ariana,emmy,rave.

practice writing test

One day it was a beautiful day to go to the theme park with my friends parents and me and my parents.So I rang them to see if they wanted to come and they said  YES so we got pocket money and went of to the theme park. So we jumped into the the bus my mum ones a bus because she is our bus driver for school. so we got into the bus and went to the theme park.

So when we got there we were all looking what ride should we go on and we said let go on the fear fall so we did. I QUIETLY SAID  TO MYSELF I DON’T WANT GO ON THE FEAR FALL WHAT HAPPENS IF IT STOPS WHILE WE GO UP OR DOWN THEN I STARTED TO TALK LOUDLY AND EVERYBODY WAS LOOKING? what’s the matter Mary said while we jumped on to the ride then we started to go up,I said to myself do not look down then I just kept thinking about so I looked down and I SHOUTED I WANT TO GET OF I’M SO SCARED.

so the ride was over so I jumped out and ran to the rubbish bin i think im going to qomet ,bbbl ahhhhhhhhhhhh. So ran said now get to choses a ride my mum said no look up in the sky it look’s it is going to be a big storm. So I SAID STORG NO IT’S NOT i WATCHED THE WEATHER,BUT I REALLY DIDN’T SO  I COME THEN WHAT ARE WE WAITING FOR AAHHH  CHOSES A RIDE I said let go on to the roller coaster. so got and all can so look i CAN SEE THE BEACH FROM HERE? NORMALLY IT WAS VERY VERY FAR AWAY THEN I STARTED TO SEE HOUSE BEING FILLED UP WITH WATER

Stop STOP Stop now now there is a sonary Stop the ride nowwwwwwwwwwwwww

All I could think off my secret place under my house so I TOLD MUM WE NEED TO GO NOW i GOT A HIDING SPOT UNDER OUR HOUSE THAT i HIRED PEOPLE TO BUILD A PLACE UNDER OUR HOUSE SO WE DROVE HOME BUT THE WATER IS GOING TO GET INTO OUR HOUSE IN ABOUT 10 MINUTES SO WE GOT THERE IN TIME TO GET FOOD AND BLANKETS FOR EVERYBODY AND PILLOWS FOR EVERY BODY I EVEN HAD TELL MY MUM THAT I BOUGHT A MOUSE PET AND A DOG. So I had to get food and that for them to so I DID JUST  IN TIME BECAUSE THE WATER WAS JUST NEXT DOOR SO RAN AS FAST AS I could and I made so I ran and locked the door’s.

And after that all i heard was birds singing I HEARD NOT WATER SLASHES SO LOOKED OUT AND THERE WAS NO WATER LEFT SO I ran outside and  I LOOKED AT OUR HOUSE AND IT WAS RUDE IT WAS FULL WITH WATER WHEN I opened the door heaps and heaps of water came out. And all I can think is where is my pet goldfish so I ran inside and went to my room and my goldfish was no there so looked every for it and I could not find but then I needed to go toilet and when I WALKED IT TO THE TOILET DOOR THERE WAS NOISE SO I OPENED THAT TOILET LID AND THERE WAS MY GOLD FISH.

Katy perry ROAR

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Little mix wings

practice writing test

One day the a kid that lived on the farm went to look for some corn for tonights dinner. While he was looking  for the biggest corn he thought to him-self it might be in the middle off the cornfield. P.s his name was ben,the mother was named mary and the father was jordan. And while ben was walking he noticed that there’s big gaps in the cornfields,so he ran home to tell his mum. “MUM MUM there a crop circle!!!!!

So his mother told him “you're kidding right?,Then ben said worriedly NO I’m telling the truth”. Come and have a look i’m not lying” so mary ran out to the cornfields and saw it. So she told her to run inside and they both ran inside and nailed the windows and taped the door so they did not with every single window and doors,and ran upstairs to hide and they bring every food upstairs and hid away.

And suddenly there was knock at the door so she got her son’s baseball bat and ran downstairs to have a look and it was a alien so she opened the door and started to whack him and then someone took the costume of and said i’m celebrating halloween  and then she “sorry and told him to get into the house quickly I need to tell you something quick”.

So he came inside with bruises so she ran to the freeze to get a ice pack.and told him we had to go up stairs now so he went up stairs and asked “what the matter” and she said “we are been a docked by aliens “ so he ran upstairs to see where was his son and he could not find him,but there was the window open so they ran outside to find him but they could not find him so they ran into the cornfields and put a trap up because there son loves playing with

traps so they put one up and waited and there heard that they found something so they ran and and they caught the aliens so they took them of the trap and the father took him to a scientist and the mother stayed looking for her son and she heard a bang!!!! so she went to the trap and there he was so she grabbf8isyiobkwed out and ran to his dad and she ran to her husband.  THE END OR IS IT!!!!

My holidays

In the holidays I went to tauranga, with my cousin Tihi. We got tauranga by my uncle Tihi my cousin Tihi’s namesake, and my uncle tally. It took a long time to get to tauranga It took three hours and half an hour. By the time we got there it was dark,because we left 5:00pm. And when we got there my papa,my three nan`s,my uncle,my aunt and my cousin were there to watch the rugby game on sky, the sad thing is the roosters won.

The next day we went to the beach it was a hot day so we thought that we will go fishing,It was me and my aunts how went fishing, I caught one snapper and the other fish was a little baby fish I didn't know what it was but it was yellow and white.

Free Blog Writing.

Yesterday me and my best friend Mary went to the Glen Innes pools yesterday,after school. When we got thier there was no one that we know so we just looked around first and see if there was even one person from our school or anybody we know,but there was know body there so we looked at each other and told each ether that we dont know anybody here.


so we got changed and jumped in the shower to rinsed so when we jump in the cold pool it would be warm. Then we jumped in and it was still freezing. Then we put our shoulder in the water for a wile to make us warm then we had a swim around then it started to be cold so we jumped in to the baby pool because it is warm like a spa,well to a kid but it was so warm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


and then we jumped back in to the cold pool and when the lifeguard went past I ask can we jump off the diving board and he said no!!! but you can dive off. So me and Mary jumped out and I did I dive first I told her to go it's your turn and she jumped out and told me she can not do so I told her to put your hands behind your ears and fall so she did it and she dived. Then we keeped on doing it for a while then we had to go. So we jumped out and had shower and got change and then went home.

the foal is born

Ryan’s mum's horse,Del was going to have a foal,for a Eleven months had watched Del growing bigger. Ryan’s mum said one more day until the baby will be born. The next day the foal has not been born so they wanted until the baby foal has been born. The next morning Ryan’s mum was in the  horse paddock,There was a new baby foal,the baby foal was lying next to the mother horse,Del.

Ryan’s dad said it is a filly,she has already been born it’s too soon? Can I go and stroke her now?Ryan mum said it too soon Del needs time to now her baby. The baby foal was half-covered in something that looked like that she was in a white bag. She was shaking her head to get rid off it. Ryan’s mum and dad and himself was watching the foal to stand up on his wobbly legs.

While Ryan was at school,his mum gave her a drink of water because as soon when she stood up for those wobbly leg she went of and looked for a feed. And after she finished drinking and eating she had a rest with her mother.

Now it time to get the baby foal used to touched. Ryan’s mum patted her. And also Ryan’s mum put a leading rope around the foal to let her get use to the feel of it. Then Ryan came back home from school and the foal was sitting on the grass so he came at the back off it and patted her. Del looked at Ryan and looked back down and started to eat again.

Then Ryan asked his mum what is the name for the baby foal and she said let make it Dosti, so he said hello dosti said Ryan stroking her soft coat.now it is time to measures they foal. mum had to hold the foal and Ryan had to measure.

Now it time for the vet to come over the vet came over to check if the baby foal was alright as well as the mother,Del. The vet took a blood test form both off them and tested it to see if they were healthy the the test said they are both healthy.

MY holiday

In the holidays I went to tauranga, with my cousin Tihi. We got tauranga by my uncle Tihi my cousin Tihi namesake, and my uncle tally. It took a long time to get to tauranga It took three hours and half an hour. By the time we got there it was dark,because we left 5:00pm. And when we got there my papa,my three nan`s,my uncle,my aunt and my cousin were there to watch the rugby game on sky, the sad thing is the roosters won.

The next day we went to the beach it was a hot day so we thought that we will go fishing,It was me and my aunts how went fishing, I caught one snapper and the other fish was a little baby fish I didn't know what it was but it was yellow and white. I looked it up on Google and it said it is a yellow tale fish im not sure but that is what it might be.

mrs goat and the seven kids

Once upon time there was a mother pig and seven kids.One day the mother wanted to go shopping so she told the  little kids “when I go out  don't open the door for anyone ok”Ok said the kids,especially don't let the big bad wolf in. The littlest kid said you know what mum I will kick it in the leg.

So after the mother pig went,there was a knock at the door “little pigs let me in””It me your mother pig”you're not my mother she has a squeaky voice like when she sings.so the big bad wolf went to the singing teacher.

“You help me I need to talk like I have a squeak in my voice like if I was singing”,”If you don't help me then i will bite off your nose”.

”Okay OKAY” A few minutes later THE TEACHER SAID THAT HE WAS FINISHED.So off went the big bad wolf.

so off went the big bad wolf went back to the house.and said little pig set me in what thats mum`s squeaky voice the big bad wolf said let me in I bought you ice cream,

show us your paw through the mail box first then then he did and the baby pig said that not mothers hoft that id the big bad wolf mother has a white hoft and black nails.

so off went the big bad wolf again.He went to find are artist.Then he found a artist and he told him to make my paw look like a hoff NOW!!!!!! OKAY,OKAY so now he is done so off is time to go.

so went back to the house. Little pigs let me in.Wait thats mum voice the baby pig said put your hand in the mail box,so he did ,the pigs said that put your tale in the mail box.

so he did and they said it not my mummy tale you're the big bad wolf.so he went and look for a dentisted and he said make my tale look like I have A pigs tale okay okay

so he got his tale done and went back to the house.when he got there he said little pig little pigs let me in ,thats mummy voice and thats mummy hand and mummy tale.then they opened the door.and the wolf eat all the kids except baby pig.then the mother home and baby pig told mum what has happen and tryed to find the pig and she did and ran into him seven times six for the kids and the last one was for him to go away.

the baby pig was not shore about that so he hide away and the wolf at the pigs hole

Little red riding hood

marama,gloria and mary little red from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

This is a movie that me and my friends have done.
Hope you enjoy my movie

Reading

An Atom Apart.

An Atom Apart.

      What are atoms?

A.   Tiny particles that make up all matter

B.    Tiny particles that can only be seen with a microscope

C.    Tiny particle that look like gnat

D.    particles that are so large they cannot be seen

a. is the answer.

2. what does the word Atomos mean in ancient Greece?       

  Something that cannot be divided any further.

3.    Complete the graphic organizer.

Electrons,neutrons and protons

4.    what is quantum mechanics

   The study of atoms and tiny particles that are even smaller is called quantum     mechanics.

5.    If You wanted to find the chemical element of an atom,you would need to ....

      A.know how many electrons it has

      B. know how many protons it has

      C. know its melting temperature

      D. see it with a microscope

The answer that I got is A.

6. the author begins this artcle by comparing a cloud of gnats to an atom.In this scenario,what do the gnats repreent? What  does the person walking through the gnats represent?

A hot summer,only to have them follow you

Me and my cousin kanesha.

    This Is My Cousin. She Is Three Years Old. My Aunty Weekends That When I was A little Girl Like Her Age A Looked Exactly Like Her. Well Come On she Got Her Good Looks From Me. The Only THing That She Does Not Look Like Me is Her Eyes Because She Has Hazel Coloured Eyes,And When She Laughs, She Has Chinky Eyes.

Her Brother Is Tihi He Come to Point England School. He is in room 14.My cousin Tihi  Has a blog here is a link. Tihis blog.

A little girl sing like a pro.

Me And My Cousin.

Me and My cousin.I call her my baby because she got some looks from me her mum said my aunty Harriet.

I have love you for a thoused years.

reading task.

Title:The tortoise and the ducks.

Author:

Characters (names, personalities, strengths, weaknesses): tortoise ducks

Setting (Where is the story set. Describe the place in detail): in the woods

What was the problem?

that the tortoise wanted to see the world.

What was the solution?

that the duck took him and showed the world.

What was the Moral of the Story?

never talk while you are holding a rope with your mouth while you're I the air

My favourite part of the story was?

is when the tortoise got to see the world.

Illustrate your favourite scene in the story. (Tux Paint, Sumo)

ugly truckey

One day there was a mother turkey she had 5 eggs. There was 4 that was looking really good but there was one egg that look little bit different it had a grey egg all the rest was white. One day they hatched except one the big grey one.

When the baby chicks hatched there were yellow, the mother turkey was wanting for the last one it took days for it to hatch.Then the mother was very worried so she swam out of the nest and started to swim around circles.

Then the next door nabourie said “what happened she cried of tears the egg would not hatched”.so the neighbour said I would came over to have a look at the egg. She looked at the egg and she said “ahh haaa I know want it is it is a turkey egg”,”A chicken  egg”????.

She thought she could hardly sleep all night for excitement. When she woke with the first streaks of light she felt something stirring under her. Yes, there it was at last; and as she moved, a huge bird tumbled  on the ground.It final had hatched but he always asked why am I ugly and the rest has pretty fethers. The mother said it just because and suddenly one of the Truckee came up and said “because you really ugly and because you are different your not a turkey your a chicken”.

Then the chicken ran away.Went so far that no one could find him the mother got really worried.

Then the chicken got scared in the dark so he sang. But then he fell asleep.Then wake up and then heard a loud noise he got scared and ran home. Then when he got home he said sorry to his my or leaving and the brother was just a pain.